Flaws

The main flaw I can see having in my essay is having too much useful information. I feel like I have enough to write about but its relevance is certainly debatable. I'm going to need to find more interesting ways to portray the facts i was given throughout my blog posts. Filling up the space in the 15 pages shouldn't be a problem partly because of how broad my topic is but finding information that is interesting and relevant to my overall point will be a challenge. I need to do this since if I just prate about all the things people did in colonial times to entertain themselves my essay will be horrible. I feel if i can plan out how to make my information concise but also be interesting and long then i should be set.